As I said before, reading with a writer’s eye on technique has it’s pitfalls. I talked a little about how it’s done, but I didn’t give you much reason to try it. And maybe I should.
Off the top of my head I can only think of one really good reason. The fiction that readers love is the final authority on what is and what is not acceptable in fiction.
I originally went on and on about it, but decided this says it all.